You have asked me for my advice with regard to _______, and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.
In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
Good Luck with your_______(祝愿)
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题).
I’m very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I’m writing to give you some advice
on how to
I’d like to suggest/advise that…
I suggest that
You would better do/ not do
I think it would be more beneficial if you could……
I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision-making anyway.
I would be more than happy to see improvement.
I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account.
I would be ready to discuss about this matter with you to further details.
Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work！
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to_________ (引出主题).
Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to _______. Besides, it should
be a good idea to___________ . You can also_____________ . (此三句不同的句式提出
建议) . As to____ , I suggest_______ (有时根据需要具体到某一反面). In addition,
_________(其他建议). I'm sure __________(预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决
I'm looking forward to _______(表达愿望).
Sincerely yours, XX
范文赏析1（student’s book page7）
Dear I’m sorry you are having trouble in However, the situation is easy to change If you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.
Firstly, why not go and talk to people standing on their own? I agree that this is difficult but that person may be lonely too. If you do this, I am sure you will soon have a new friend.
Secondly, you can begin the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes. That way, you will soon find people with the same interests. I think that is a good way to find new friends.
Finally, you should try to join in a discussion. You may not feel that this is right, but by doing this you are letting people know how friendly you are. So there should be no problem. It should certainly provide you with some new friends.
I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful 例文分析与范文赏析2（40分钟课时作业page68)
I am writing to express my views concerning our school’s decision that all physical education should be cancelled.
Our school, in order to make us students do well in the exam, has decided to cancel all physical education. Maybe it’ s a good idea, but I
think it would be better to have PE classes.
There are many reasons for this. Firstly, physical education is a necessary part of education. Secondly, Pecan make us students healthy and give us more energy to review lessons. Thirdly, PE can enrich our school life and increase our interest in study. Lastly, we students need a way to relax ourselves in order to increase our efficiency of study. So I would appreciate if you would consider my suggestions and think about letting us have PE class.
Looking forward to getting your reply.
2. 建议课内多说，多看， 多听汉语
3.建议同学之间进行汉语比赛等，以培养学习汉语的兴趣和能力。 参考词汇：汉子听写比赛 Chinese character dictation competition.
SAMPLE WRITING spend more time practicing, listening, speaking Chinese as often as possible. You know it takes time and energy to learn a foreign language. watch as many Chinese films or TV series as you can to get your Chinese improved. If so, your will definitely make it in learning Chinese.
up for some tests, for example, Chinese character dictation competition with your classmates so that you can build up your courage and express yourself well in Chinese.
How to write a letter of advice?
教学过程： Step1 Lead-in Show the handwriting of some compositions,let them know the importance of handwriting. Students are required to read a sample letter based on the
following information. Then they are asked to work in pairs and discuss with their
partners what the structure of a suggestion letter is. The teacher makes comments
June 8, 2008
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice no how to learn Chinese well.
June 8, 2008
Dear Peter, I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you'll be able to
learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and
read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a
good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you'll learn and remember
Chinese words more easily. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell
you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
Try writing to me in Chinese next time.
Ⅲ.Structure of a suggestion letter
Have one student say something about the structure of the suggestion letter and teacher
makes a conclusion of the structure of the suggestion. (Show them on the blackboard)
(Blackboard)The beginning part --- to whom do you write/ greetings
The body part – one’s advice or suggestions on certain problems.
The ending part—express one’s hope or wishes / name of writer.
Activity1--Adding more information
Some good example sentences of beginnings and endings are offered to help
students to learn how to begin/end the suggestion letter. Ask students to read the
sentences individually and make sure they know the meanings of these sentences.
I would like to suggest that…
I am writing to express my views concerning…
You have asked me for my advice with regard to… , and I will try to make some suggetions…
I hope you will find these suggestions/proposals/recommendations help/practical/useful.
I would be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
Activity2--- Making Sentences.
Have students use the sentences patterns to make sentences according to
Chinese sentences. Then check the answers by asking several students to speak
out their sentences one by one. The teacher can give students some help if
Step 3—While Writing.
Activities 1—Offer topic of writing
Step 1 Arrange structures
Step 2 List the key points
Step 3 Make sentences
Step4 Form a passage and polish
3. 适当放松 4. 向周围求助。
Sorry to hear that you are feeling upset these days.
Be brave enough to meet challenges in life. Wish you good luck!
3、How to write a letter of advice
Task one :Arrange structures (pair work) structureWhat should be written
Part IIIPurpose of writing this letter Our advice to solve the problem Express our hope as a conclusion
Task two: some useful phrases
List key points (individual work)
Task three Making sentences (group work ).
b. . It is
（翻译。并用If I were you , I would 改写）
f. If I were you, I would
g. h.Task four : Form a passage
• To form a passage ,some conjections or link words need to be employed.
• First, second, third….Finally
• Firstly, secondly，…eventually
• to begin with/ to start with, at last
• 递进关系： furthermore；moreover； not only...but also...； not...but...；, besides；
in other words；on the one hand...，on the other hand...； meanwhile； at the same time；
Activities 2—Offer model of writing
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出对方需要建议的主题).
Here are a few suggestions (引出作者建议). First, it is important to . Then, it also helps . Besides, it should be a good idea Y. ()
As to , I suggest (有时根据需要具体到某一反面). In addition, (其他的建议). I'm sure (预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心).
Activity 3---- 审题
Teacher and students work together to make conclusion about how to write the letter. Teacher writes it on the blackboard.
4. 内容要点：① 问题介绍；②建议一；③建议二；④建议三；⑤我的愿望。
Step 4—Post writing
Activity 1--- Presentation
Every group chooses the best article in their group to present. The rest should listen to him or her carefully. They note down good sentences and patterns in the articles if students can.
Choose two articles written by students and project them on the screen. Students are required to make comments on these articles and correct the articles.
You should rewrite the suggestion letter by yourself and hand it in tomorrow
You have asked me for my advice about___(问题), and I will try to make some suggestions here.
In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following measures___(建议的内容).
I hope you will find these suggestions useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you for further details.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
1.参加中文学习班 2.看中文书刊、电视3.学唱中文歌曲 4.交中国朋友
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practise with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
Try and write to me in Chinese next time.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours, Li Ming
提示：掌握 master；提高 improve；养成...习惯 form the habit of...
It is nice to receive your letter. Here is my advice on how to learn English well.
Try your best to learn the words and sentences from the texts by heart. It will help you form the habit of thinking in English. And it is important to master the grammar so that you can write English correctly. I also suggest that you should speak and listen as often as possible. It will be good for you to understand what you have learnt better and it’s also a good way to improve your listening and speaking abilities. Besides, keeping a diary in English is helpful in improving your writing skills.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
1.表示歉意 2.解释原因 3.另约时间
I'm sorry, for I won't be able to pay a visit to Beijing next weekend with you.
Because there are many friends of mine facing a coming English exam, which is without important for them. They are looking forward to my giving a hand to them and they hope to get through the exam successfully.As a result, I will be busy helping them at that time. In addition, I will attend a party which aims to raise money for the people of Yushu, who suffered greatly from the big earthquake.
In a nutshell, I'm afraid I'll have no time to accompany you. So I want to put off our time of the visit until the first weekend of next month. Is it OK?
Looking forward to your early reply.
5月1日, 高二(3)班的学生志愿者Li Yue和Zhang Hua去阳光敬老院(Sunshine Nursing Home)开展志愿者活动(送水果、打扫、聊天等)。假如你是校英语报的记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则100~120个词的新闻报道。
Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly
On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work. Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor. Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.
When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for the kindness. They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.
Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy. What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.
by Chen Jie,
There is a widespread concern over the issue that_____作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that_____观点一________. In their views there are two factors contributing to this attitude as follows：in the first place,_____原因一_______.Furthermore,in the second place, ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that _____观点一_____.
People,however,differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that _____观点二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand,_____原因一___
____. On the other hand,_____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no doubt that _____观点二______.
As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that_____观点一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________.
Nowadays,there is a widespread concern over （the issue that）___作文题目______. In fact,there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking,it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly,___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____.
Just As a popular saying goes,every coin has two sides,__讨论议题______ is no exception,and in another word,it still has negative aspects. To begin with,___缺点一______. In addition, ____缺点二______.
To sum up,we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play,and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case,we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.
Currently,there is a widespread concern over （the issue that）__作文题目_______ .It is really an important concern to every one of us. As a result,we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.
As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem. First of all,__途径一______. In addition,another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途径二_____.
Above all,to solve the problem of ___作文题目______,we should find a number of various ways. But as far as I am concerned,I would prefer to solve the problem in this way,that is to say,____方法_____.
It is well know to us that the proverb：___谚语_______has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study. It means ____谚语的含义_______.The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows. （also theoretically ）
A case in point is ___例子一______. Therefore,it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____.
With the rapid development of science and technology in China,an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying： ____谚语_____. The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying,the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job.
Nowadays, with the development of the Internet, there is a kind of language called Web Language. Some People even speak Chinese fixed with English acronyms（英文缩略词）. Should we welcome so-called
Web Language? Our class had a discussion about it.
A minority of students thought it was a bit ridiculous(荒谬的). In their opinion, it was useless helping people communicate or learn English. Besides, it would ruin the Chinese language. However, a majority of our class were fond of Web language. They thought it was helpful in expressing themselves. What's more, it might make the language more interesting.
In my opinion, it's not a good habit to use Web Language. It may be popular as some people think, but you may also make yourself difficult to understand.